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A space battle with land battle toming

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4 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-27-24

Mr. Nutal did not consider the vastness of space nor orbital mechanics. Events happen in less than one hour at distances that should have taken many hours and did not use the planets to hide or accelerate about. This was distracting and pulled me out of the story.

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A sad story of opression

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2 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-03-24

A very depressing story of that wanders aimlessly..
Depressing and meaningless.. A waste of time

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You can't prove a negstive

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3 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-25-24

This story could not keep my suspension of disbelief in tact. It is well told but the base argument for the issues and actions taken by legally trying to convict someone

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A classic well told Jack Campble story

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-23-24

I Jack Campble writes again. A well told story with a welcome very different focus a pace. An enjoyable read.

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More Threads a good story and growth

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-02-24

I could not predict this story, which is a good thing. Joshua has grown in his story telling ability and creativity. He has increased his story line threads and number of events going on at the same time. This keeps the reader more engaged which I liked.

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A well told story that is different

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-24-24

This complete story is not a standard Omega Force story. I enjoyed this unique tale.

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Good well told story

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-21-24

The team was dispersed, each member for a different reason. Getting them back together is a continuous problem throughout the story.

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Excellent Story craftsmanship

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-22-23

Great story, character development with unexpected turns. I enjoyed the story pacing and development.

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A Good Story with a slow wind up.

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-19-23

A Good Story with a slow wind up. Good character development.
why does this rating require more characters? It is now 4:30 in the morning and I just want to sleep. By demanding more words I am now awake. I should have just not bothered to write a review. So now that I am fully awake I might as well start my day.

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Finally a space story not at war with its self.

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-13-23

I enjoyed this well told story about being pushed out of your comfort zone, starting over, and making the best of having to start over and succeeding with the attitude and determination you bring to your new life.

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