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Spoiler Alert

Total
1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-05-21

What a mess of a book. I entitled this review spoiler alert because the author does the spoiling. You know about two chapters in what is going on. Hint: The creepy neighbor keeps feeding her next door neighbor green smoothies that have a bitter taste and the drinker just keeps getting sicker. Oh, also, the creepy neighbor has a daughter who has an ongoing illness that is never revealed, and her symptoms are the same. Could it be ... everyone's favorite bizarre and incredibly rare disorder ... MSBP? So you have supposedly smart and capable characters - the poisonee is a nurse, for godsake - who just don't get it, plus a bunch of plot elements that are held together by ... well, they're not held together. I just skipped chapters to find out how much wasted prose it would take for the aha moment. The frustrating thing is that the writing style is not bad. I'm getting my credit back.

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Not Great

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-17-19

Not a bad plotline, but the writing itself is annoying. Too many adverbs, long descriptions of feelings. Show don't tell. Needs a good editor.

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