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Allen M. Bonneau

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Good but short

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-28-25

The length makes it seem like it’s pulp fiction. It’s a decent story, but the books are a bit short at 7 hours.

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Ok

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-26-25

The story is decent but I am not the audience it’s intended for. It seems a bit YA.

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Great story, some very minor issues

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-22-25

The story was great.

Not sure if it was the narrator or the author, but there were some minor issues in the wording. I don’t recall the wording but one example was something like “in the beginning I liked the idea in the beginning”. There were a couple places where words were plural when they were talking about a single item.

this one is more on the narrator or the audio editor. The switches between characters were not very obvious. There was a slight break before the new character, the name, and another slight break for the story to continue. The breaks before the names needed to be slightly longer. It wasn’t clear there was a context switch going on in several cases. The breaks were about the same as the breaks between sentences. It was a while before I caught on.


I still recommend the book cause the story is engrossing. Those are minor issues that don’t detract significantly from the story.

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Not much story

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-20-25

DNF

Good fight scenes but not much else to the book. Very little backstory, very little detail on characters. Just names and some motivations. I gave it a couple hours, but it’s starting to feel like a MOBA in book form. It’s PVE, but the characters can also PVP.

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Not bad but not great

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-12-25

Good story that seems to bog down with introspection and analysis in the second half. I haven’t finished it yet, but it’s starting to bog down with all the wordy descriptions of why they are doing x or choosing y.

As others have noted only the MC is developed as a character. All others are really just background.

It’s well written and well read, but the second half gets slow. I’ll update this review it gets better/worse in the last 5 hours.

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Not a good story

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-07-25

Got a few hours in and it’s not good. It seems like it is supposed to be YA, but it isn’t. The story wanders all over the place. The magic system could be interesting, but the author killed with too many words. It felt like a fan boy describing his favorite scene in a movie. It’s important to him, but nobody else cares.

The characters do things for unknown reasons. At one point one character says I can’t leave my post. A couple minutes later, he leaves his post. Wtf? Even then the scene is interrupted for something else.

I wanted to like it.

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Scent story, but ends kind of abruptly

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-06-25

Good story. Lots of action. Ends kind of abruptly. Even an epilogue would have helped.

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Ok at best

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-04-25

The female character seems to have a simpering voice. It’s hard for me to get past. The narrator did the same thing in another series and I stopped partway through cause I couldn’t handle the simpering voice. The laugh. She does it too much. I don’t know if it’s in the story or if she’s substituting it for the laugh text, but it gets old fast. Partly cause it sounds fake and partly cause it sounds like a 15 year old telling double entendre jokes. She’s trying too hard.

The story wasn’t bad per se, but it dragged. Half the book seems to be about cooking. It was a lot less I’m sure, but it was all over. I expected more fantasy elements, but it’s more sex fantasy. The story seems to be heading in a harem direction based on the direction the author is taking.

I was hoping for better.

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Synopsis is a bit misleading

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-31-25

The synopsis suggests Callum is going to have more of a role than he does. Even though he is supposed to be a major driver for the actions throughout the story, he is only in two scenes until the end of the book. It feels like Callum got into the MC’s head. The MC and his leaders are driving a lot of the story based on a couple seemingly minor interactions. The leaders have their own reasons for allowing the actions to proceed, but it still feels like something that was made out to be bigger than it really is.

A couple spots in the story get too wordy and it drags a bit.

Overall not a bad book, but it could have been better. Not sure if it’s good enough to get the next in the series or if it will be more of the same.

Ending was a bit of a surprise, but not a cliffhanger, just a a point to make you desire getting the next book.

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Good book, but it ended abruptly

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-29-25

Overall an interesting story. The ending was kind of abrupt like a longer book was cut in two. Didn’t follow traditional stories with slowing action prior to end.

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