D. Johnson

Stories varied nicely.

Revisado: 01-15-25

VV was horrible. ruined the stories. using male voices for female characters confused who was actually speaking at any particular time. If you're going to use VV, get the character's sex correct.

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The way the stories enmeshed together so well.

Revisado: 12-24-23

To biblical starting a third of the way through. It started getting irritating with all the God and prayer, etc. if I wanted that I would read the Bible.

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A lot of intersecting stories keeps it interesting

Revisado: 08-12-23

Other than there being too many chapter announcements, it was great entertainment and even better than Volume 1.

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I've never heard the word etcetera so many times

Revisado: 06-01-12

What disappointed you about Lewis and Clark?

Virtually every thing said in this book is repeated at least twice, making the book twice as long as it should be. This includes each date and who is speaking. After about a half hour you want to quit listening.

What did you like best about this story?

The actual stories told by Lewis and Clark are very interesting in spite of their being told twice for each day's story and each person's story for that day.

Did the narration match the pace of the story?

No, it was slower because of both repeating the narrative and repeating the dates over and over again.

If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from Lewis and Clark?

I actually wouldn't cut much of the story out except the repetitive stating of etcetera, etcetera over and over again.. I would just tell the story once instead of twice. That would cut listening time to about 30 hours instead of the 70 hours and 28 minutes that will take to listen to this story unless I go completely crazy hearing every passage repeated twice or more times and the word etcetera spoken thousands of times during that 70 hours and 28 minutes.Yet in those 30 hours you would hear every word Lewis and Clark originally wrote, missing nothing except the repetition.In fact, I may go to the LewisandClarkTrail.com site and just read their words exactly as they wrote them. It would be a bit harder since they are written verbatum with all of the spelling of that time included.An example of a passage I just listened to about 1 hour ago:September 30, 1804 (Camped on a sandbar in Sully County, South Dakota, just below the mouth of Cheyenne River)"had not proceeded on far before we discovered an Indian running after us, he requested to come on board and go up to the Recorees we refused. Soon after I descovered on the hills at a great distance great numbers of Indians which appeared to be making to the river above us, we proceeded on under a Double reafed Sail & some rain. The Stern of the boat got fast on a log and the boat turned & was verry high, The Chief on board was so fritened at the motion of the boat which in its rocking Caused several loose articles to fall on the deck from the lockers, he ran off and hid himself, we landed, he got his gun and informed us he wished to return, that all things were cleare for us to go on, we would not see any more Tetons. We repeated to him what had been said before, and advised him to keep his men away, gave him a blanket a knife & some tobacco, smoked a pipe & he set out. We also Set sale."

Any additional comments?

Yes, this series really does need to be edited to eliminate the duplication of every passage or virtually nobody will be able to make it through the book. I have listened to about 9 hours and am ready to give it up and read a different book before I go insane. I am puzzled why the duplication wasn't edited out since reading each narrative twice adds nothing to the story and the constant use of etcetera is extremely irritating. What is strange is that when I read their actual Journal entries in their Archives there is no repetition nor have I seen the word etcetera even once. So is it the author of this version who chose to make reading their experiences so tedious and make what was an exciting adventure sound like watching ice melt?If so, it is a disservice to Lewis & Clark as well as to Audible listeners.

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