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Good idea

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-11-25

This story has the bones of a really good story, just falls short in a few ways. It’s almost like the author didn’t take the time to think a few things thru or go the extra distance for overall story development. The author attempts to take an MC from an ancient time and put the MC in a modern world. The modern world has its own dystopian quirks that are not developed very well from a story telling perspective. There is a secondary MC character that almost feels like an after thought, the personality of the character just feels out of place in the story and the fit is just wonky.

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good story continues

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-23-23

My only complaint is simply the overall length of the book, way too short. Duke Fontaine does a fantastic job, as always. I saw on social media that A American said the next book is intended to be longer and will follow many of the story lines setup in this book- I just hope that holds true. I am a little weary of how any split stories develop that don't involve anyone from the MCs. there are a number of new and/or newer groups or characters that were established in this book, I hope the story does start following them independently.

A American: I will wait as long as needed for a book that is twice as long or more. A 10/11/12 hour book just doesn't seem to satisfy the reading or listening pleasure.

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just short of 5 stars

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-18-23

Book 1 was amazing and book 2 was nearly just as good. my primary issue with this book is probably a bit odd but it is what it is: I wish this book covered more - or a longer period - of time or perhaps it focuses too much on the school combat matches . Book 1 covered at least half a school year, I think? book 2 seems to only cover like 2 weeks time.
Given, we FINALLY get the back story on Grant and the character development on him.
I am eagerly awaiting book 3; I just really, really hope it's not another 2+ years before we see it.

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50 shades but not

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-16-23

If you are looking for a direct continuation of the last book, you will be disappointed. This book picks up where book 1 left off and ventures into other characters. Can we get some story with the porn? I'm only slightly complaining. The porn is written decently and the narrator does a good job. I was hoping for more story tho, but I guess this series isn't about the story. I also don't know that it's about romance either. I've listened to a lot of harem stories, harem tales usually include a decent amount of plot and story. fans of this series like porn literature.

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more than romance

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-16-23

Overall the story was good, just wish there was more of it. The narrator was pleasant to listen to. If you are looking for more porn than plot this book should fit. I'm all for good steamy sex or porn, but I also like a good story. Maybe book 2 will drive the ploy out?

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uncertain direction

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 10-20-22

Luke Daniels is fantastic as always. My issue is with the story. The past 2 books have sent the plot in a direction that seems intentional (and unnecessarily) accelerated. Joe wants to find the fastest path to mastering his skills without necessarily taking the time to learning how to do it the correct way - this leads to many comical situations that the game AI decides to comically reprimand him. With this book, he finally discovers the flaw in his path to mastering those skills. The continued story line with the Elves and Dwarves during Joe's exile just seems annoyingly rushed to me and I'm not following how the characters from the lower plane and suddenly connected to the next plane.

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Another sequel falls short

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-22-22

Book one was an interesting perspective on LitRPG, it was at least interesting enough that I decided to give book 2 a shot. I dont have any complaints about the narrator or the audio production; although, I'm not sure the narrator can expand much with anymore additional characters. The few additional voices (apart from the main characters) fell short of believable voices. Beyond that, I think this book fell short due to the lack of humor between between characters and dialog. The dialog felt rigid and straight to business. There also wasnt a lot of dialog between characters and the little that was there was always intercepted or cut off by the MC. There was ample character development, but aside from the MC there just didnt seem to be any relatable humor in the story, it just felt dry. Additionally, the plot seemed to stagger in locations, perhaps the flow from one location to the next? Unfortunately, my investment into this story will end with book 2.

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was expecting more

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-24-22

so this story is probably my first disappointment from Luke Chmilenko. The narrator and pace of the story is fine. I think for me it's that the characters are confined to arenas. the fighting experience is similar the Iron Prince story in that the landscape varies. the Iron Prince is probably my #1 book right now and maybe that is driving a bias for me to not like this particular story.

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Well done

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 10-04-21

This story has unlimited potential. The author has established a completely unique LitRPG story and its very well written. The narrator is pretty good too. Thus far, each book is healthy in length which gives good lasting listening time - at least for me. For this particular book, it's just less than 3 weeks into the opening off the in-game experience. The virtual game, AI perspective is pretty cool.. The author uses his personal experience from RPG games and other various life experience and has found a way to mix them together. Further this author is an "Indy or Independent" author and has shared that other authors have been rather unfriendly to knew authors in the genre. While I accept this, I dont really understand why other established authors would feel threatened but new authors. I would think that would only drive creative conception to write better or more entertaining stories all the way around. Regardless, I have so far come to really enjoy this particular story, the author hasn't disappointed yet, and with 6 books in, I find it hard to see I'll be disappointed in the future.

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interesting spin on Dinos

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-06-21

The overall story on dinos is fun and interesting. I like the harem aspect, BUT the sex dialog is weird and awkward. I can't tell if it's intentional because of the 3 difference MCs or if it's bad writing? The story focusing on dinosaurs is fairly smooth writing, so I suspect the sexual dialog is intentional and I have no idea why. you can get better sex dialog from a porn movie or xxx book.

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