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Good story but….

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-05-22

The narrator in my opinion wasn’t fitting for the story, I had trouble getting into the book. Second problem, sometimes it was a little hard to follow who was who. No parts of the book is in first person but pronouns and descriptive nouns change as if it IS in first person, suddenly which then makes you realize the point of view of the character in this particular chapter has changed. Such as the main character Jamie will suddenly be referred to as Mom nothing else changes narrative-wise except it’s telling you what is going on with the daughter Harley but it’s NOT Harley telling the story. Imagine telling a story about a Bob then suddenly refer to him as Dad even though he’s not your Dad is sort of how it sounds in this narrative. Once I got through the hiccups I finally got into the story and the twist and turns made a great story!

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