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Dan Janal

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Even a great story teller needs an editor

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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-26-18

Way too long.

First story about the astronaut was fascinating but her background as an astronaut was irrelevant.

Second story about the data miner was inspired but Toto long to get to the point.

The story about accuweather should have been the headliner. It is terrific and terrifying.

Final story about the red barn made no sense.

Need a strong conclusion and a call to action.

Dan Janal
Book coach and author of “Write Your Book In A Flash”

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esto le resultó útil a 5 personas

I’ve listened to several writing/reading courses...

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5 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 06-24-18

This was the best.

Clear. Concise. Great examples.


Dan Janal
Author, “Write Your Book in a Flash”



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