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Poorly written

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-02-19

I was super excited to read a story focused on queer female characters. The actual story was ok but the distractingly poor writer became painful to overlook. The word usage was redundant, unnecessarily simplistic and lacked creativity and depth. It really was just painful to listen to repeated statements like, “she said” used over and over like there are no other literary choices.

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