Matthew K. Goddard

grade-A entitled feminist

Revisado: 05-05-25

Paige is insufferable. completely and totally foul. Everything is a slight and everyone owes her something. nothing is her fault. her flash backs are a worthless waste of time. but they have valuable information.

the story building is solid. the magic system is well developed. the story is good.

the performance is top tear.

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just tell a story

Revisado: 04-22-25

so preformers add mouth sounds and talk with food in thier mouths

the author wastes whole chapters on crazy sidebar monologs but can't find 30 seconds for major plot twists

can you for once write a story about saving a little boy!lilly had to save her little sister! she is only important because she is a little girl. just once you misandric haters.

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the story is good, stick to the story

Revisado: 04-21-25

major complaints

1. talking with mouth full
2. food sounds
3. making fun of elementary math
4. passing off 3rd grade math as advanced math
5. trying to teach sex like you are 10yo

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50 - 50

Revisado: 04-19-25

Stop with the Food Noises. I am 1/2 through the second book and I still can't handle it. it is gross disgusting and ammeter.

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best book of series, so far

Revisado: 04-15-25

no RPG over talk, no broken personalities, no toxic social posturing.

just a good story about the improbable possibility of alternate reality. it was fun.

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Title Returned

Revisado: 04-13-25

what the heck is this?

1. chapters. where did they go? you publisher and editor need an intervention. a fifth grader from public school could do better

2. there was on Section on Erin. Nothing about Lionette and almost no mention of Ryoka.

3. Floss is a terrible Character and his story line adds nowhere

I returned this book.

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can you read?

Revisado: 04-02-25

dear Author,

Isekai is getting in the way of your story. What is worse is that you run off on pointless tange in almost every chapter. why don't you make a flow chart or time line? you need something to guide the progress of this cluster f!.

the whole vitality rant is old. it is stupid and lame.

I also feel that a second voice actor would add to the story telling. NH has two distinct voices. There are points when his reuse of female voice is disturbing and confusing.

basically you have taken a good idea for a story and ruined it with cheap tricks and useless filler noise.

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misandry at its worst

Revisado: 03-09-25

dude, you have either dated and been exposed to the worst women on the planet or you simply hate men. yes, Victor is just a bit too much sometimes. no, other people's feelings are not his fault. please stop writing the worst possible love stories ever.

the progress of the story is fun and upbeat. it's a nice way to escape the moment.

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Drop it with Chandri

Revisado: 03-05-25

the Chandry arch is pety, ugly malicious and adds nothing to the story. she doesn't even merit a side piece. She diss'd Victor in the first Book and now she is back bitter and vengeful. what is worse is that Victor keeps sending her mixed signals. Drop her and let her go. She made her choice and that choice hurt Victor. Now the only respectful thing to do is to be cold and not lead her on.

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you suck at love stories

Revisado: 03-04-25

your characters over think everything.

your women are like spoiled children whom nobody wants to baby sit.

you men can't commit to anything, let alone another person.

Victor has a better relationship with his Axe than any woman in this series.

for Pete's sake sometimes women just want to hook up for a night. sometimes guys don't want to run an emotional obstacle course to get laid.

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