OYENTE

Colleen Geier

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Bad writing and bad narrating

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Revisado: 05-18-23

The concept of the book was in intriguing, but I was very surprised at how bad the writing was. Some examples of what bothered me are: using the same adjective repeatedly within 2 or 3 sentences, repeating the same concepts word-for-word throughout the book. and not actually having conclusions. Certainly a skilled author could find different ways to reiterate points without quoting the exact same words. Throughout the book the author said things like my attempts to contact a particular person failed or my attempt to gather information about something failed. So they really was very little but that the other could actually prove. The narrator was very frustrating for me, She had a woman voice and a man voice and every single character sounded exactly the same. It was boring and I kept forcing myself to get through the book to see if it would get better but it really didn't.

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Great storyteller!

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-05-21

South Bend is so proud of Mayor Pete, now Secretary Pete. I live in SB and voted for Pete, but still learned so much from this book. he's a remarkable young man.

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I want more!

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Revisado: 05-09-20

I really enjoyed the story and the characters. I'd love a sequel, I want to know what happens next.

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From dream to dream.

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4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-08-16

I really enjoyed the descriptions of the Apollo missions! I learned a few new things, and I'm left wondering, again, why we haven't continued with plans to keep exploring and working in space.

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